Friday, July 18, 2008

The Center for Wooden Boats

Sent away.

3 comments:

ctm said...

I like the revision. "Blue-etched keys" is nice.

After hearing you and David talk about blogging last night, I started mine up again. Poets are such bad influences :)

Charmi said...

Thanks, Clayton.

Have fun with your blog!

maeve63 said...

It's coming along nicely Charmi. I'm still favoring the
"It’s akin to suturing
cobwebs to moonbeams" line. I think that's my favorite image.

I posted a revision of my workshop poem today. If you get a moment, it would be nice to hear what you think.