Monday, April 13, 2009

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(So, I like what I have, but I'm falling quickly back into my old ways. I can't bear to add the wrong thing and ruin it. Man, am I going to have a lot of work to do come May.)

It's just a shadow

This gestalt that falls
Across the face of the moon

5 comments:

Rachel said...

You're doing a great job, Charmi. You're going to have a lot of seeds when you get finished. Stay with it! :)

Charmi said...

Thanks, Rachel. I thought by this time it would be easier, but alas and all that crap...

Rachel said...

I totally understand how difficult it can be when you don't FEEL like writing, but I think it will pay off in the end. This is something I'm going to try, too.

Vince said...

I love this one.

Maybe you can leave it as is.

It's an image that ripples.

Charmi said...

Thanks, Vince. It was good to see you the other evening, but always too short!