Sunday, April 12, 2009

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(We were salamander skunked today, but someone brought a hummingbird nest in to the Nature Center.)

Say the hummingbird's
A home wrecker

How else to account
For the missing orbs

She'll carry it off from the porches

A touch of lichen on
The windows and it feels

Just like yours

4 comments:

ctm said...

I LOVE that opening couplet. I want to steal that opening couplet. But I won't...

Charmi said...

Thanks, Clayton! If only a couplet could be a poem...

Talia said...

I think this is great.

Charmi said...

Thanks, Talia. It needs editing, but a start...