Friday, August 31, 2007

Post Amniotic

(Yes, not the best. Too tight. Too controlled. I can feel it, but perhaps something to push something else out. Who knows. - re-revised. I like it better this way.)

Let the days fall
post amniotic.

Rake the heartbeat,
ancient whirr inside the womb.

Autumn in the nursery,
transposing every bone.


Talia said...

(gasp!) This is incredible, Charmi! Keep going!

Charmi said...

Thanks, Talia. I have been trying, but mostly tossing.