Friday, August 31, 2007

Post Amniotic

(Yes, not the best. Too tight. Too controlled. I can feel it, but perhaps something to push something else out. Who knows. - re-revised. I like it better this way.)

Let the days fall
post amniotic.

Rake the heartbeat,
ancient whirr inside the womb.

Autumn in the nursery,
transposing every bone.

2 comments:

Talia said...

(gasp!) This is incredible, Charmi! Keep going!

Charmi said...

Thanks, Talia. I have been trying, but mostly tossing.