I used to dream of a house that opened room into room into room. Or a yard full of wild tame animals -- turkeys, a lion, a bear. Our cat watches ghosts track across the ceiling, puts her head inside the toilet bowl and yowls. We ask her what she's thinking, but she never tells us who. All spring I sleep with my back against the moon, while my husband opens the curtains, positions me in its pool. He checks my breathing, covers my face with vines, my wild gray hair. He lifts my hand and drops it. I never move.
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That was lovely.
Thanks, Mark.
If you'd like to give this a try, DDL has this poetry exercise and others at: http://molestingtheclover.blogspot.com/
Wow! What a nice picture. I love the "covers my face with vines" very beautiful.
I agree: good stuff. I've been meaning to write some poetry for some time now...maybe tomorrow night I'll give DDL's exercises a try.
Thanks, gals. It's nice to be back in a writing class again.
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