Wednesday, January 07, 2009

I Have Seen What I Have Seen

Gone, baby, gone.

6 comments:

Talia said...

Pretty incredible, what you have here, Charmi. I especially like the 2nd stanza.

Charmi said...

Thanks, Talia. I'm revising a tad more then sending it out. It's been hanging around unfinished for ages, bugging me.

Michael said...

Criticisms: Uses too many of my recent and ongoing favorite words: Aphrodite, poppies, catalpa, limbs...

Praises: Hey. Rhyming. Way to go.

Looking forward to seeing this in my friendly neighborhood major literary publication some time soon...

Charmi said...

Man, Mike, I miss you at the workshops! Thanks for the encouragement :-)

P.S. You are welcome to steal the words back.

Rachel said...

I really, really like this.

Charmi said...

Thanks, Rachel! I hope you're starting to feel better. Jeez.