Pretty incredible, what you have here, Charmi. I especially like the 2nd stanza.
Thanks, Talia. I'm revising a tad more then sending it out. It's been hanging around unfinished for ages, bugging me.
Criticisms: Uses too many of my recent and ongoing favorite words: Aphrodite, poppies, catalpa, limbs...Praises: Hey. Rhyming. Way to go.Looking forward to seeing this in my friendly neighborhood major literary publication some time soon...
Man, Mike, I miss you at the workshops! Thanks for the encouragement :-)P.S. You are welcome to steal the words back.
I really, really like this.
Thanks, Rachel! I hope you're starting to feel better. Jeez.
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