(So the idea is this month is a first pass in a field of tall grass. By the end of the month I hope to have some sort of arc to play with.)
She worked at the Rent-To-Own
We heard a lot of noise coming
From the back of the bar
Arguing, then I saw fighting
I noticed her getting slapped
Someone pulled her hair
She hit the floor
My vision was obstructed
{Did you hear the slap}
I saw the slap
{But you don’t know who}
There were lots of people
The lights came on
I proceeded to leave
There was a crowd of people behind her
She came out quickly
I saw him run into the crowd
This was the crowd
That was hitting her
He’s wearing a sweater vest
His shirt is green
{Was she alone}
I’m not sure
{Can you indicate
Who in particular
You saw throwing these hands
That were hitting her}
I can’t
She was on the ground
Someone was
I assumed it was her
I was leaving
I don’t normally get involved in other people’s fights
{Whenever something like this happened
Would you try to get out}
ASAP
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