(Yes, not the best. Too tight. Too controlled. I can feel it, but perhaps something to push something else out. Who knows. - re-revised. I like it better this way.)
Let the days fall
post amniotic.
Rake the heartbeat,
ancient whirr inside the womb.
Autumn in the nursery,
transposing every bone.
2 comments:
(gasp!) This is incredible, Charmi! Keep going!
Thanks, Talia. I have been trying, but mostly tossing.
Post a Comment