tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-32246081.post116974658750813724..comments2023-06-08T09:12:42.021-04:00Comments on Cleopatra's Handmaiden: BreathingCharmihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10022195322111249963noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-32246081.post-1170119588023908642007-01-29T20:13:00.000-05:002007-01-29T20:13:00.000-05:00Okay. Reading Gluck is helping, immensely. There...Okay. Reading Gluck is helping, immensely. There is something to what you said about reading more, and too, I think taking off the analyst outfit helps. That probably didn't make sense. I mean, of course, stopping my incessant thinking and just finding a way to move.Charmihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10022195322111249963noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-32246081.post-1170010942232603052007-01-28T14:02:00.000-05:002007-01-28T14:02:00.000-05:00this is vastly improved. it knowsto go outside it...this is vastly improved. it knows<BR/>to go outside itself, it knows how to use the images that present themselves to you. and I think the rhythm is pretty fine. it's sure getting there. This poem<BR/>gets into dreamland in spots, wereas your other was all effort<BR/>and THOUGHT, or felt like it. This<BR/>is a very good revision . . .David Dodd Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14621886180328237133noreply@blogger.com